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California wildfires in 2020 have burned 4,000,000 acres of forest across the State of California. The area burned by the California fire has reached 33.5% of Taiwan. The year 2020 has witnessed the largest wildfire season in the history of California.
California wildfires have become an annual phenomenon. In the past, the fire season started from May to October. In 2020, the fire season started from January 16th to November 6th. Obviously, the California fire season in 2020 had started earlier and ended later than before. By the way, some wildfires were caused by thunderstorms; others by arsons, and still others by droughts.
The wildfires in 2020 have killed more than 26 people and have burned hundreds of houses. The California wildfires in 2020 are unprecedented gigantic wildfires in history. In addition, the scale of the wildfires is twice as big as what happened in 2018. As stated above, the wildfire in 2020 is a serious incident.
Everyone must pay more attention to both ecology and greenhouse effects. Everyone can improve the effects together. Everyone must develop good habits. For example, everyone turns off the lights before leaving home and takes the MRT instead of driving cars. Everyone can make their contribution to improving the environment. Everyone can help the earth get better by reducing the environmental pollution.
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ReplyDeleteCalifornia wildfires have become an annual phenomenon. In the past, the fire season started from May to October. In 2020, the fire season started from January 16th to November 6th. As stated above, the California fire season in 2020 had started earlier and ended later than before. By the way, some wildfires were caused by thunderstorms; others by arsons, and still others by droughts.
ReplyDeleteThe wildfires in 2020 have killed more than 26 people and have burned hundreds of houses. The California wildfires in 2020 are unprecedented gigantic wildfires in history. In addition, the scale of the wildfires is twice as big as what happened in 2018. As stated above, the wildfire in 2020 is a serious incident.
ReplyDeleteEveryone must pay attention to both ecology and greenhouse effects. In fact, we can improve the greenhouse effects and cultivate good habits together. For example, we can turn off the lights before leaving home and take the MRT instead of driving cars in our daily life. In conclusion, we can reduce environmental pollution to prevent the earth from being ruined.
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